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for Acid and Alkaline

by Bartzina

person hfreak
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fucking wondeful. You are amazing.
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
person Ryoko Katsuya
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow,is all I can say.I say anything else would spoil this reveiw leaving me unworthy of saying a single thing about thsi story.Your talkent surpasses even the greatest.Leaving me breathless and satisfied at the end of a good day.Keep up with such good writing.,Oh,but yet I\'ve said so much and in the end it all seems worth it for this wonderfully weaved story of lust and primal need at its best.
Thank you
person jadeskye
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOoo, i love it, full of angst, need, lust, and brilliant description.

I loved the line \"they had marked this place as their own with their scent\" (or something like that)

Brilliant ^_^