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for Ethereal Desire

by Etherea

person anonymous
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read what happens next!!
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story is great so far and i cant wait for more
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is WONDERFUL. How dare you leave it like that! ***screams in anger****

This story has completly moved me in all aspects. I feel like an addict wait for her next fix. You just have to update. The ending of chapter 5 had me screaming for more. This really is one of my new favorite stories of this piaring. I hope you get posting soon. I have to say I hope miss Pansyass as I like to call her, gets killed in the most gruesome way, hopefully by Draco.....sigh...A girl could hope nay? I love the way you charactorize Draco and Harry, it\'s very refreshing. I also admire the way you are not going at a fast pace with this story and that you take the time to give detail to all that is going on in the story. While reading this I actually got sucked into the plot like I was reading a real novel. I hope you uodate soon. If it is not to much trouble, could you possibly send me an e-mail when you update this beautiful story. My e-mail is justina02908@yahoo.com

Wishing you the best,

rAiNwAtEr
person Emeraldwolf
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...really amazing fic. good to see plots popping up in this genre lately. ^_~ keep up the good work!!
person Rae
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU CAN\'T DO THAT!!!

In all honesty, it\'s just plain cruel. Leaving the reading audience at such a devastating cliffhanger. You could have at least written the muttering disbelief that is sure to accompany Dumbledore\'s sudden appearance and claim of Malfoy\'s innocence. Oh no, not you. That would give the reader a chance to cope with the sudden proclamation. Heavens forbid that of course. ^_-

None the less, what a terrific fanfic. I am truely enjoying the manner in which you display both Malfoy\'s discomfort and integrity. He refuses the claim that he is in the wrong vehemently, and yet is terrible adament about denying his involvment with the side of light. Such complexities.

Well, I am unfortunate to not be able to finish this review due to a shrieking harpie behind me. I will write again when I have the time.

With regret, and enthusiam

Rae
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you had me worried! I can\'t wait for chapter 6!
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u must update soon...pleaseeeeee.... im really enjoying your story !!!
person FrouF
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO DRACO!
I\'m trying to squish my resent that Draco still seems so immature...
but other than that, alls good!
lovely lovely lovey!
Update soon dahling
person acr
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Poor Draco.
person zentiis
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is speechless*......
that is honestly one of the best fic\'s i\'ve read in a VERY long time (and i read alllllot). Your writing style is just lovely and the long chapters are a plus. Bravo!