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for Ethereal Desire

by Etherea

person * i n c o h e r e n t *
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my! what an evil cliffhanger! but certainly, this chapter is one of the best in this story. the emotions were intense and just so real. plus the twist in the end... and i loved the pensive scenes. your descriptions and attention to details is simply amazing. looking forward to the next update!
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! truly wonderful. You had me in tears. Such emotion, such feeling, God I love this story. How dare you leave it there! The audacity! I think I just might die. I have been waiting a long time for an update and I wasn\'t disappointed in the least. I look foward to another chapter, and soon. I am really in love with this story. I absolutly love how you characterize Draco and Harry. I love it. Please continue. Bravo, bravo.

Your fan,

rAiNwAtEr

p.s, thank you so much for the e-mail. I was shocked to see that you really sent one notifying me that you updated. --gives big hug----
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was great.
person Kali
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I\'ve not read a fic this interesting, convoluted, descriptive, hot, well-written and downright addictive as this one! I take my hat off to you and kiss your feet... you had me hooked from the first sentence, and I sat and read through the entire lot without being able to tear my damn eyes away. Your characterisation is *perfect*... and the complexity of your storytelling truly impressive. One is always happy to find talented writers on here. I humbly await your next update.
person kay
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh nooo the evilness of the dreaded cliffhanger!!! ...the evilness!! well i really liked the chapter i like like it all.... cant wait to find out what happens next.... :>
person Sahira
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More of this fantastic fic:) I love your long chapters....Update!!!
person Emina
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing skills are impeccable!
I mean, the way you word things... it even makes the most mundane actions seem interesting!

I really have to say I love this story with a passion... I can really get into it, like a movie, it\'s just THAT detailed.

Not to mention the obivous, but this seems to be a rather unique story plot... thought nevertheless entertaining.

One of my MANY pet peeves is how people seem to write the story characters out of character.

I just HATE it.

But, in your story everyone\'s in character... the personalities are in check and I see nothing wrong.

And I\'m usually a hard person to impress with it comes to putting characters into their personalities and keeping them there.

You MUST update and continue this soon.

person xfreakonaleashx
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story, i really love the court room stuff! Write more, update! please! i love it!
person ghostninja85
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better stories on aff right now. The tension is amazing, and I love the angst Harry and Draco are going through right now.

Please upatate as soon as you can. I can\'t wait to see what Dumbledore is up to.
person C.W.
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can i say except that i love it. simply love your fic. looking forward to further chapters. if you have a mailing list for update notices, please add me to it.