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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Powerful chapter. I really like the way you build the plot and the tension just rises to the skies. Really well written, and I am eager, excited and waiting for more. Please post soon, I love your work.
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don\'t update really fast i might just send a pack of death eaters after you!
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!! I can\'t wait for the next :)
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, how could you leave it there? I was really getting into it. And from the chapter title I thought we would see him saved.
Got to admit, that seeing draco strach at his beautiful face, and having blisters that spell, prurjer, was creepy and made my skin crawl. Oh, make then restore his face quickly. And please update quickly. What did Draco lie about exactly? I hope lutton, did something to make the spel malfuntion.
I can\'t wait until Ron, finds out harry was meant for Draco and not his silmy sister. I bet Ginny knows this and that is why she wants Draco in jail. PLEASSSSSSSSE update soon. Like tomorrow.
1. Snape is a bad advocate! His stupiduty in trying to get Draco to break 20 years of malfoy training in one day was just stupid.
2. Snape as his advocate should have TOLD him, that if he lied while on the stand, his skin would itch and when strached it would spell out prejerer. Any lawyer would warn there client that. And Draco is a fool not to ask what the spell woud do befre he submitted to it.
3. Since he had nothing to do with the dark actitivites he was being accused of why didn\'t snape just have him testify under truth potion to begin with, then there could be no doubt. Snape and his cloak and dagger, stupid slytherin plans almost got Draco killed. Really Pansy was the best person to illustrate Draco\'s position during the war. Which was due to their parents, the children of death eaters had to act a certain way and say things. But as soon as their families were defeated, they were able to recant. The rest of the ppl, he could have shown childhood rivilies caused hurt feelings.
Got to admit, that seeing draco strach at his beautiful face, and having blisters that spell, prurjer, was creepy and made my skin crawl. Oh, make then restore his face quickly. And please update quickly. What did Draco lie about exactly? I hope lutton, did something to make the spel malfuntion.
I can\'t wait until Ron, finds out harry was meant for Draco and not his silmy sister. I bet Ginny knows this and that is why she wants Draco in jail. PLEASSSSSSSSE update soon. Like tomorrow.
1. Snape is a bad advocate! His stupiduty in trying to get Draco to break 20 years of malfoy training in one day was just stupid.
2. Snape as his advocate should have TOLD him, that if he lied while on the stand, his skin would itch and when strached it would spell out prejerer. Any lawyer would warn there client that. And Draco is a fool not to ask what the spell woud do befre he submitted to it.
3. Since he had nothing to do with the dark actitivites he was being accused of why didn\'t snape just have him testify under truth potion to begin with, then there could be no doubt. Snape and his cloak and dagger, stupid slytherin plans almost got Draco killed. Really Pansy was the best person to illustrate Draco\'s position during the war. Which was due to their parents, the children of death eaters had to act a certain way and say things. But as soon as their families were defeated, they were able to recant. The rest of the ppl, he could have shown childhood rivilies caused hurt feelings.
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, I am sitting here cursing you because it has stopped here! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Continue!
~Reba
~Reba
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, just one small thing I forgot to mention, it\'s Wronski Feint not Wronsky Faint! (still love the story though!)
~Reba
~Reba
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story and the drama! I can\'t wait to see what happens next......
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! You MUST update \"this instant!!\" Com\'on!
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 5! What was it that Draco remembered? Were they together while at Hogwarts?
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reviewing, I\'m reviewing! This story is AMZING! *grins* I can\'t wait to find out what happens! Update soon PLEASE!