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for Adding to the noise

by darkimage

person Adrian
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Slightly ugly? Umbridge looks like a sodding TOAD!

Anyway, I love your story... when the hell are you updating?! ^ ^ Please do hurry

~A
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 3!
person Silence
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! at first I was like whoa! moving really fast here, but then it got to the part after the friendship where there like \"kiss me! but wait I can\'t!\" and I was all happy again! update for me pretty please!!! I\'ll give you a Harry and Draco sunday!!! question Harry dom or Draco? or switch?

Silence
person ?????
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was sooo cute plz update soon
person who me?
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who is going to be dom? i assumed that when you put D/H in your summary that draco would be but someone else also did that and harry ended up as being dom. if he is (and i don\'t want you to change it because it\'s part of your vreation) then let me know, unless it\'s obvious in the next chapter, so i can look elsewhere. it looks good so far though.
person Sarah
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m loving it! their little \"was not\" argument on the plane was so cute. those poor boys. they keep gtting interrupted. keep going. i can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Fefs
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hieuehieheih so cool!! I\'ll just have to kill this person that kept interrupting when the good stuff was about to happen!! Please update soon!!
person zentiis
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad, the paragraphs need to be seperated a bit more than into big blocks of writing (just makes easier reading), otherwise the fics pretty good! ^_^
person elecktra
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Update soon!
person elecktra
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Update soon!!