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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For the first time I read the story, I think it\'s good, slightly desperate but beautiful. You end it perfectly as you said that it\'s only one shot.
Yet, now you continue in a very good plot, interesting story. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. The way you tell the story, like I can see the views in front of me, pheeww that hard. You are really a story teller (...and believe me I\'m very picky)
Well, hope I could hearing from you soon.
Yet, now you continue in a very good plot, interesting story. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. The way you tell the story, like I can see the views in front of me, pheeww that hard. You are really a story teller (...and believe me I\'m very picky)
Well, hope I could hearing from you soon.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wunderful! Fantastic! Gorgeus! Definitely want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!1
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You Have no idea how much I appriciated that you add another chapter and I hope that their will be many more. You really did a great job. The poem from draco\' s book is just breathtaking. Well...amazing covert it well I think
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like it. It is very good, and oh so hot!! Please, I am begging you, update as soon as is possible for you! I will love you forever and ever if you do...in a strictly platonic sort of way.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have to update soon! I have to know what happens next!!!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, the first chapter had me in tears...It was so sad!! I\'m glad you continued tho! This is an awesome story, even though it\'s very depressing. Please update soon!!!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smile* Chapter 3 please!!!!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!! HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE?!?!?
:*(
It was just getting good! That was a VERY mean cliffie!
Please update soon! Your writing style is amazing!!
I\'m glad that you decided to prolong this story...the first chapter really left something to be desired taht the second chapter nailed right in the head!
I love this story!
Please update soon!! luvs!
:*(
It was just getting good! That was a VERY mean cliffie!
Please update soon! Your writing style is amazing!!
I\'m glad that you decided to prolong this story...the first chapter really left something to be desired taht the second chapter nailed right in the head!
I love this story!
Please update soon!! luvs!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn\'t sure if this was going to be a one-time story, am glad it\'s not...but now I wish for more. Very spell-binding. Great job.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont get me wrong! I love both chapters! BUt the first chapter is really incomplete without the second!
You\'re a terrific writer! Please continue :D
You\'re a terrific writer! Please continue :D