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for By Order of Lord Potter

by serpentclara

schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know its been a few years, but is it possible for this fic to be continued sometime soon??? I really enjoyed the forst two chapters and I'm yearing for more! Please email me of there's any chance of this being updated. My email address is urgurlrindi@yahoo.com
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well it is easy to see where you are going with this. Please, please, please let Hermione "use" them for sex (without them knowing) and in the end fight with Dumbledore to become the next ruling Lord. Don't kill off Harry, Lucius or Ron though as it would be great if they ended up whipped and unable to deny her; no longer as best friends, but as subjects like the rest so that they will not be in a position to take over the title again. Dumbledore could even be the one that installs her into the position once he finds out what they did to her...her best friends. Just a thought. Can't wait to see where you go with this. p
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it so far, update again soon.
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I hope Hermione rebels - perhaps she needs to teach the men a lesson. She's a powerful witch after all.
person Coipje
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know its been 3 years since you've updated this story but please update it I love it really :D pretty please
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person EmandSky
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update, i really like it, it's a good plot
person JayDee
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start to a story! Lucius' initial domination of Hermione pushes all the right buttons without going too fast as some writers (like me) are apt to do. It's already good and there's potential for it to be truely awesome by the time the witch is broken to Lucius' will.
person skye
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
such a nice start... dark Harry and Delish Lucius... please update?
person sinbad
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, who would have guessed Harry being that ruthless? Are you going to let Snape in on the game too? You have my attention.