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I absolutely adore your fic! >__< you have a wonderful way of writing and describing the characters, it's so vivid and unique the way you picture them!! in particular the way you picture Draco! So dominant and manly! >///<
Since his arms can become dragon like why can't Harry have some cat's traits like fuffly black ears and a tail? he has the fangs! O___o it will make Draco sooooooo Happy!! ^___^ all that new things for him to play with! PLEASE!!!! >.< Imagine that I am some kind of little fur ball with impossibly large eyes , how can you say no to me?! *___* (puppy eyes)
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I order you to update more often!!!....PLEASE!

I\'d get a beta reader if I were you. Running the story through a spell-check program isn\'t enough. For example, \'fair\' and \'fare\' are both spelled correctly, yet have completely different meanings. You made this mistake in the first paragraph alone. It\'s simple mistakes like these that detract from an otherwise good story. Compare these kinds of mistakes to a verbal storyteller who mumbles. The storyteller may be telling a good story, but the mumbling detracts from the story and listeners will soon lose interest. Written stories are no different. It\'s all in the presentation.

this was a really sweet story. I was suprised.

I have only read up to this chapter so far, but I had to comment on \"H.D. Shipper.\" Best laugh I had all day! Off to read the rest

I quite enjoy this story, even though your spelling and punctuation are absolutely atrocious. *Laughs* But that happens to the best of us. Anyway, just wanted to encourage you to keep writing. It\'s an interesting idea. But you sort of confused me a bit at the beginning of the chapter. Correct me if I\'m wrong, but didn\'t Hildey accompany them on their last trip? Because I seem to recall it being mentioned that everyone went last time, and yet, this time, she was excited because she had never gone before. I just thought I\'d point that out. Also, if you\'re interested in a beta, I\'d be happy to do that for you.

Thanks for a good reading. Hope to find some more...

hey i really love this story and i want to read more. I couldn\'t get that yahoo link to work. is there an alternate way to get to the yahoo group, because my computer is claiming it does not exist

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 7! Did Harry just channel Mava? Harry is in danger and Draco will leave him with Hermione and Ron. He needs to come forward and let them know. Oh I worry so!

I love this fic! Top Draco/bottom Harry is on of my favorites. I can\'t wait until the boys can get together for more than talks. And how does Severus play into all of this?

Please update soon the story is really great... sometimes a little confusing, but great^^