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for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

by Lori

person MystressCyanide
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great, it has some really neat twists in the plot which I have never seen before in a Draco x Harry creature fic...if people are telling you off about spelling errors or something stupid like that I say ignore them! This story is awsome and especially well done for something which is only betaed ocassionally!
person Miss Loaf
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey - just a quick note to say how much i'm loving this fic - I haven't enjoyed reading any H/D fics for so long, and its really refreshing to find an original idea like this :D. I saw in your A/N that you don't have a full-time beta, so i'm now offering you my services - i haven't done so for ages, but i have beta'd before in the past, and am also an English Lit. student, so i would think that i'm qualified :P. If you do want a beta, get in touch, if not, don't worry! Hope you had a good Christmas!

MissLoaf x x
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its very good
person sam
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey...I love this story...it is really good....I know this isn't helpful or anything but i can't see anything wrong with the story so any constructive critisism i would type would be totally untrue....update ASAP
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's going great!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!! I adore your version of Harry/Draco so far. *waits hopefully for next chapter like a puppy waiting for a treat*
person Leah
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I for one love the plot! *gives you cookie*
person Byrnes
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear that people have been badmouthing your story. I, personally, love it. It's very original. I like the way you took a typical plot of Harry or Draco being mates and making it completely your own and forming a whole new world. If you'd like, I could serve as a permanent beta. I more often than not check my e-mail every day, so if you'd like to take me up on my offer, feel free to drop me a note. I don't mind beta'ing and I know how valuable they can be. When one reviews their own work it can be very difficult to catch errors because they have the "correct" words so deeply ingrained in their mind.
Best wishes,
Byrnes
person Nyouko Youko
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say this is a great story. Update Soon Please.
person Becky
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You story is awesome!! chapter 8 is going be great!!!!!
person TeeDee
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm! Yet again another lovely chapter! I adore where this is going... for the second time... but I AM dying to read more. Ah well. With how wonderful it is coming together once more, I can be patient until completely new stuff enters in! XD