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Hey, I love your story, and I hope that you will update soon. I'm sorry about you not being able to keep a beta for long periods of time. If you want, I'll gladly beta read your work. I love it.

Tinuniel (aka Veronica)

This is a really really really Wonderful story...probably one of the best I have ever read. It may have some grammactical errors and so on, but that is no reason for anybody to give you rude reviews. Anyway... I hope you Update soon! ^__^ Also I Love the way you put Harry as an uke, its so Kawaii! *bows to authoress*
Ja Ne!! ^____^
Shadow Raven

P.S. Try to make sure that Draco takes down that asshole who is tryin to hurt Harry, I would love to see him pay for what he is doing. PLEASE!! ^.^
P.S.S. Please forgive me for short review.

Look angel, you cannot base your art on other peoples reaction, they either love it, hate it, or don't understand it all. Write to please yourself, after all, it is your imagination at work here. Personally I like your story, the spelling is only a slight distraction, use spell check or something before uploading to AFF. Since I am no writer ( only a voracious reader), I don't know how you input stories here on AFF, do you type them in manually or upload them from your computer? Update soon, I hope. Thanks for sharing your talent.

I might not have a lot of time anymore, but I would gladly help you beta. Your story is amazing and I love it. I manage to overlook the errors knowing that we all make them. I smack myself when I do them, but then we all do.

email me if you want my help wynter.rose@gmail.com or message me at cynfulrose on aim or cyn_24 on yahoo. I will gladly do what I can for you.

Hey, I'm sorry about the rude reviews. I know how much that must hurt. But I LOVE your story, a lot.
I haven't reviewed before, I'm sorry. I'm terribly shy and scared that I'll say something wrong but I thought, Hell with it, I'll review now.
Your story is wonderful and I LOVE Draco/Harry (Dom!Draco and Sub!Harry). I crave it sometimes and wow, your story just always feeds my craving. I'm a little weird, sorry.
Ahem. But if you ever need an extra Beta person, email me and I'll help. I'm not a grammar or spelling whiz but I get by. =]
And I could beta your past chapters so you could repost them all spiffy and such or I could just beta new chapters. Whatever. I'm flexible.
Ok, I'm starting to ramble.
I Love your story, it's bloody amazing. One of my favorites. Fucking amazing.
Keep up the great work, dear.
<3-Karen

Ignore rude people. They're unhappy and don't understand why the rest of us aren't unhappy too. For what it's worth, I think you're writing a great story. I'm hooked and hope you post more soon.

I'm so happy you posted! I love this story, it's so cool and original. Ignore any idiot who flames you. If they get so annoyed by reading they can always click to read something else. You rock, please update again soon! ^_^

I have heard of beta readers but never understood what it meant? If you explain it to me i may be able to help you out? also i beleive i have read this on fanfiction.net but then the author just up and quit and i was so upset!!!! anyway anyone who dosent like your story is a complete idiot! I love it and wish you many more great chapters!!!!! your doing good!~


EVILONE

I don't know what kind of reviews you are getting but I really like this story, and would love for you to continue writing it.

..I can't believe someone would do that to you. Flames drive me absolutly off the wall, and considering how wonderful your story is, I'd shoot them. >:( I really love your story... at first I was thinking "okay... it looks interesting", but by the time I finished that last chapter, I was immediatly looking for a 'next chapter' button... lol.

You've done a wonderful job with the creature creation, and although the characters are wonderfully OOC, I still see traits of their old selves popping up at random moments. :) I'm really enjoying this, and if you need a beta, I will be more than willing to do it for you. I have a decent command of english grammar and spelling (although I screw up a lot too, lol). I did notice several spelling mistakes throughout, but they are few and far between, and since your chapters are so big it really isn't very noticable. :D

Anyhow, I'm very sorry someone flamed your story. :( It isn't right for people to do that.. you've taken time to write this for entertainment purposes (and I for one really love it) and that work shouldn't be thrown out like that. This story is WONDERFUL, and if anyone else says something to the contrary, I'll beat them with a frozen tuna. Promise. :)

This story gets a 10/10 for creativity and length of chapters. Thank you so much for sharing it here... seriously. :)

--AngelStarFire