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for Harry Potter and the Shiverin Descendent

by Lori

person Demon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your A/N and I think that what you said was very good. I have the same problem with my Beta's but I know they can't help it and I don't blame them because they have helped me. And I also absoultly love your story and I do hope you post another chapter soon, this story is amazing and when ever you update I instantly read the next chapter because this story does put a smile on my face ^-^
person Alison
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Thanks for updating! =o)
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for 7C or chapter 8. Whichever comes first! Draco had better bond with Harry immediately! Oh I'm worried!
person momoko
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
person momoko
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
person momoko
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Anonymous
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally leave many reviews, but I just thought I would tell you that I really do enjoy your story. I don't mind the problems people are saying you have, and really like the plot. Please continue with this and don't let what others have to say get to you.
person queixo
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi. i started reading your story last night and decided to wait till i was finished before i reviewed.
i like the premise of your story even though some parts happen too fast, it still seems more thought out than alot i've read.
as for stopping here, i hope you don't because then the reviewer who decided to be an ass because of spelling and grammar errors which were alot less than quite a few stories on this site would win and that would suck rotten eggs.
that said i would like to offer to be your beta-reader. i haven't done it before so i don't have references as such but i do speak and write perfect english - it's probably the only language i can speak and write properly. my email should show above but if not it's LUGIA_DC@YAHOO.COM. if you want i can start with what you've posted already. just email me the chapters in 1 text file or you could use MS word but you would need to let me know which version of it you have. i'm using word 2003.
again i repeat please don't let a dumbass reviewer make you stop this story, i for one want to know how it ends.
Queixo
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!
I love your story!! it's really interesting and it has a good plot and it even has a great title to it to!!
do u still need a beta?..........I'm willing to be your beta if u need one.
person Jes
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to hear about the rude reviewers who have been slandering your wonderful story. I can completely understand your perdicament with the beta, you should remind them that you do warn them that there is no beta for this story... I would just like to tell you that I discovered your sorry today and am totally speachless when it comes to this story. Never before have I read anything so creative and new. I must tell you that i can not wait for an update to this wonderful story, I look forward to more and wish you luck with the rude reviewers. Thank you so much for your story you truely inspire the mind and stimulate the awakening of the imagination. I would just like to say that if you ever need help with your story do not hesitate to contact me my other email is mil05029@byui.edu... thank you again Jes