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i think that this story is really good and i do hope that u finish it.....and those who make coments about how bad somebody spells or uses grammer are those who don't realize that it is hard to post a story on the internet for eveyone to read and so should keep there coment to themselves....anyways, i realy do like your story......so please finish

Yay! I'm finally reviewing your story! ^_^ I totally love it! It has to be my favorite that I've ever read... I com back every day to check and see if you have added the next chapter yet or not! -_-6 I know, I act like I'm still 16... but isn't that a good thing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really love your story and I hope you don't end it. I first saw it at ff.net but then they kicked it off the site and I kind of got pissed at them. I do hope you continue to write as you have always done. I can only see in the chatpers that a few rephrasing would do and some spelling of words are wrong. I wish you the best of luck for this new year.

~Dark~

I'm also hoping to know what happens after they've bonded. I read up to there and I'm seriously hoping something good happens to them. They deserve it.

~Dark~

i absolutely love this story. i can tell its well thought out. and its so detailed! i love the plot as well. i have read a lot of stories but this is dfinately an original. so that means it kicks ass : ) keep up the good work! i cant wait for more!

Ohh, I like the entire story and premise! It's a new direction and plot line. The names and new words confuse me a little bit, but I eventually figure it out. I would tweak the grammar, but then again, I'm no expert either. ;) There is one suggestion I would like to give, maybe at the top (or bottom, whichever) you should leave a little dictionary for all the words used thus far in the fic. It would certainly make it easier on the reader.

Other than that, I greatly enjoy the story as well as all the twists. Never would have thought. Ignore the bad reviewers, sweetie, their usually just idiots anyways. I usually just challenge them to write a story and *then* come talk to me.

Keep up the good work,

~ Sprinkles

I don't know what other ppl are saying, but I really enjoy reading your work. It is creative, funny and its well written. I say keep up the good work!!!

I absolutely love your story! XD I can't wait for the next installment! Also, I know this may seem a bit unorthodox, but would you mind terribly sending me an e-mail when you update next? Thanx! Much Luck!

those bastards!
how dare they insult your work
it is a good and well thought out story
and there are hardly any gramatical errors
words can accidently be missed
don't mind them and keep up the good work
i love your story
and i really hope to see an update soon

signed

an impatient fan

Really, the nerve of some people! I don't review often, but I should start reviewing more often. I love this story and I don't care about your spelling! I know you've got up to chapter nine done.... so seriously. POST THEM!!!! I was one of your fans when you posted on FF.net and I remember the chapters up to the train! PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!