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I wouldn\'t necessarily call it a \"twist\" ending, but it was still pretty good. I like that the characters are fleshed-out enough without needing to explain every bit of backstory.

I\'ve always been kind of miffed how \"ugly\" Rowling makes the Slytherins, except for Malfoy and, I believe, Zabini. Today\'s kids are a lot more sophisticated, and they can see through the fact that ugliness doesn\'t necessarily equal evil. So it\'s good that fanfic writers redeem the Slytherins, at least in that way.

LOL, great read, and nice to see a few different Hogwarts characters in there too. Love that it was a bet for Malfoy\'s benefit and that Millie made a point of telling him that Harry lasted longer. :)

that was pretty cool. that millie is one scheming... slytherin. she really played neville and harry well. but even though millie might be pretty and sexy and curvy, i don\'t really think harry would have let her push hermione away like that. he would have told her to shove off or tried to follow his best friend to another table. now of course, that argument could disappear if you had made a note that snape put his two sense in and told harry to stay where he was and get back to work. but you didn\'t so i had to comment on it. i really liked how horrible it made harry feel afterwards. it makes me want a sequel where he gets with hermione. how about it? you up for that? thanks for a great little story at any rate.