rate_review Reviews

I waited until I finished reading this to tell you what I think. This girl, Pansy, is whore!!!!!!!! WHORE!!!!!!! But I already knew she was a whore before reading this fanfic. Good story, but only problem with it is that it has no plot. I can\'t stand sput without a decent plot. However, good story non the less.

I think that this is just a very different book than Rowling\'s others. It takes on more mature themes, and the sudden hook ups of Ron and Lavender, Harry and Ginny, all accurately portray teenage relationships. As for Lupin and Tonks, Rowling explains that this has been brewing for sometime, possibly many years. It\'s not sudden at all.

So Fun!!!! This is an intriguing character... and you\'re doing well..

Please, get her fucked by Snappy more often :D

Yessss, Oliver Wood! He is just what I\'ve been wanting! Thank you!

You\'re absolutely right! I like the book and all, but it didn\'t seem Jo\'s style at all. In some instances, I\'ve read fanfiction that seems to fit her storyline better. Oh well. I hoping she reveals more abouit Lily Evans next time. There\'s so much more I want to know, but I doubt she\'ll be able to answer it all in the last book. There\'s just too much and the books have been decreased in size. I wish you the best of luck on your own stories. Cheers.
-Megan

same here read for 7 hours straight and was dissapointed as hell but maybe number 7 will make up for it

Sorry mate, i\'m gonna have to go with the \"you\'re crazy option\". Dumbledore behaving like Luna? How did you get that? Are you talking about when he arrives at the Dursley\'s? Cause that\'s just him showing up the Dursley\'s complete lack of manners. Or maybe you\'re referring to the chapter where they visit Horace Slughorn and he comments on the Muggle knitting pages? Let me remind you, this is a wizard who\'s welcoming speech was \"nitwit odment blubber tweak\" (or something along those lines, i don\'t have PS to hand at the mo, sorry), he\'s not exactly you\'re average joe bloggs, he never has been.

I thought Ron and Lavender getting together was explained pretty well - lots of admiring looks from Lavender, Hermione pisses Ron off, he goes running to the girl who\'s been making soppy eyes at him for half the year. Makes a lot more sense than how some of my friends got together in secondary school!

Harry and Ginny...... c\'mon, this is soooo explained. He sees her kissing Dean, and the green-eyed monster pops up. I think thats been brewing a while. And people don\'t always have romantic feelings for someone straight away, in my experience you can be friends with someone for years in a really platonic way, and then one day you look at them, and you want to fuck them against a wall!

Erm, i\'m bowing out of the rest cause i\'m really really tired and want to read some of your fab story before i go to bed! I think HBP is very much down to personal choice - it\'s fast becoming my favourite of them all, and i love how JKR\'s developed her writing - the style couldn\'t stay the same for this one, as so much of the story content is vastly different from the last 5 books.

Anyways, enough blabbering from me, have a nice evening/day (depending on what time zone you\'re in!), and please keep writing fab Pansy\'s story! I\'m hooked!

Molly

i know it was nothing like her

I totally agree with you. The story was riveting, but not Rowling\'s best...

*First, Ron and Lavender made me barf, although I know the only reason he dated her was because of Ginny laughing (attacking) at him for never having kissed a girl. And her stupidly telling him that Hermione had kissed Krum. (Hate Ginny) He then went out and acted like an ass (a teenage boy) and kissed the first tramp who gave him any affection...Lav. The only thing that made me happy was that he was thinking about Hermione the whole time and running away from Lavender any chance he could get.

*Second, Dumbledore is the most powerful wizard around beside Voldemort. He wouldn\'t get killed that damn easily unless, there was a reason for it. Also, his portrait was up in his office sleeping \'already\' after he died and they hadn\'t even buried the man yet. Why is that?

*Harry and Ginny\'s romance was way too fast and came out of nowhere! He never gave ANY indication about even noticing her in the last few chapters, but all of a sudden, he\'s over Cho and jealous of Ginny and Dean?! Not believable.

*Lupin and Tonks, I love the idea, but he\'s acting like an ass since she obviously loves him and doesn\'t care if he\'s a Werewolf or poor or older. Fleur didn\'t care about Bill. I do think they will be a solid couple though.

* And most importantly, I think Dumbledore knew Snape was going to do what he did and was prepared for it. And Snape, I think, is not the villian this makes him out to be. Remember, he had plently of chances to KILL Harry, Hermione and Luna, Flitwick, but he didn\'t. He only attcked Harry to stop him from chasing him AND he stopped the Death Eaters from Crucio Harry. VERY Interesting...

I read HBP and I was thinking the SAME things! I was reading and all of the sudden I had maybe 10 pages left...and I was thinking \"What the HELL?\" That sucked so horribly how it turned out, nobody seemed right and just...ugh! As amazing as JKR is, I think I prefer the fan fiction. By the way, I love your story...I\'ve never read anything that went so in-depth about Pansy...and I\'ve never reviewed before haha but your comment just was exactly what I was thinking. Here\'s to hoping Book 7 fixes it all.