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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t get the end.
Are you writing a sequel?
Its an okay story.
Are you writing a sequel?
Its an okay story.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this one shot would make a great story. It would be great to see a sequal come out! I liked it, if i hope to see a continuation ~silently
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this story has a great start, it is very individual and original, please make it a multi chapter story!!!
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this, i wish u had have written more
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A couple things to improve upon:
Use a spell and grammar check at least (beta\'s even better)
Keep the characters *in* character
The ending made no sense
Use a spell and grammar check at least (beta\'s even better)
Keep the characters *in* character
The ending made no sense
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really really like your story I know its a one shot but it would be realy cool if you could continue this story.keep up the great wor
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good. I think you should do Draco/Hermione stories more often. I think that you have some spelling errors but nothing to bad. I love it. The plot is amazing! Keep it up.
Latricia
Latricia