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This was awful. You are in desperate need of an intensive grammar review.

i think what youur doing is a reallllly good ideaa and keep up wiyth the lemons! like maybe a threesome or something...and now with katarin...wow ! is there going to be like an orgy with all the grandaughers because i think that would be a good idea ... . yea anyway i think this story is awesome so far and to keep up the good work and please update sooon!!!! thanks !

wow continue

Please don\'t continue this. What you seriously need to do is go back from the beginning and revise and revise and revise again. Keep a dictionary handy, because most of your pronouns aren\'t even in context with the rest of the sentence. It is hard to read and way out there as well. Too far out there.

I can easily say that this is the worst fic I have ever read.

i cant help it...i really really want some sort of romance in the story...im a romantic at heart...anywayz...update! looking forward to what happens next

I read the first chapter and thought hmmmm very very twisted but no doubt Draco will get his comeuppance in the end, and oh I so wanted Hermione to nail him for that, so then I read part of the second chapter and when I realised that that just wasn\'t going to happen I was appalled! Then I skimmed the fic to see how far the depravity goes and my jaw hit the floor with a painful thunk WTF?

Your view on Draco was quite humorous in a non funny and completely off base kind of way for the fourth chapter \"Face it, Draco Malfoy, is pure evil. He hates Potter, Granger and all the Weasley