rate_review Reviews

This is an interesting story, but for warnings I would suggest you add BDSM, since that's basically what you've done. Not saying it's a bad thing I like the story alot. Poor Hermione, she's been sold to draco lol.

I think Hermione is a little bit too I don't know not Gryffindor
no courage

Poor Hermione and Ginny, but hey, if you're going to be anyone's concubine, might as well be DRACO'S!!!!!! :)
Hell yeah, and you KNOW those boys are hard watching Draco do Ginny!

Wow, I just reviewed all of your previous reviews, now I know why you didn't continue. I'm so sorry that people are so blatantly RUDE. They don't have to read it ya know. You really shouldn't listen to them anyway!

Note to reviewers: Geez guys, since most of you have NEVER written stories, why so harsh? Ease up peeps!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

jk.

to be bluntly honest, I HATED IT!

really nice story homie... waitin anxiously 4 more

Am slightly confused, you said that the original story was written by somebody named Katharin, went and looked it up, and your name appears. It seems to be the same story, a lot of lines are copied out of the original one shot. The original story seems to be written pretty well opposed to yours which has a plethora of spelling and grammer errors. This story would be much better if the characters were less OOC and more believable. Hermione would never, ever start peeling off her knickers for Malfoy. There would definately be a fight, and a rape scene, maybe even a threesome would be good for this story. But since you have no ability whatsoever for writing a story, my advice is to drop it. You ruined it with the horrible OOC characters, and the capitalized swear words in chapter two. Not much else I can say for this story, but please discontinue.

Very interesting fic you\'ve got going here. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.