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for The Betrayal of The Boy Who Lived

by jaber03

person Vampire
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...LOL...

Infinitely amusing.
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh? This is complete gibberish!
person Petalsoft
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.k. Yes, it was funny, especially the ending. Good job.
person wes
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there is somthing wrong with you the first hole bit is pointless no the hole thing is pointless its not funny its just boring
person u forgot one part of the story
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey the part about him at his aunts all she had to do is care for harry just the slight bit theres a little love in there and thats all but all in all not bad lol