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by Bargle5

person Bargle5
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Dragen. The name change thing is a result of the basic premise of the piece, namely that the different sections are supposed to be from different drafts of the story with there being small differences between. It will happen again as I write more.
Sorry you didn't like the name Herfinehiney. Humor is often a matter of individual taste and no one likes everything.
Thanks for taking the time to review. It is much appreciated.
person Dragen
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start to the story, I didn'tlike the name change half way through the story... I really didn't like the name Herfinehiney...
person Bargle5
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks very much, Spike. Glad you enjoyed it.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't care who you are, that's funny shit, there.
person That one girl
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I think I just found Harry Potter A LOT more enjoyable (even though I'm a HP freak) I espiecially like the Sleep Fucky Sickness and how Percy missed it. But the thin kwere the mother just knows I found that just slightly disturbing
person Lady Greyhame
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious!
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the stupidest thing I have ever read in my life.
person Bargle5
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m only anticipating two chapters being necessary for the second year stuff. One of the nice things about AFF is, if needed, I can go back and add another chapter.
No, I haven\'t come up with the Slytherin names yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
person dragon34
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, but how can you ahve a chapter 6 and no chapter 5 ? I like how you have their names, it\'s too funny. Do have one made up for any of the Slytherins ?
person Aisling
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL :D :D this is funny!! i like very much cya xx