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That was good, hope to read the next chapters soon.

Holy Fucking Christ!!! You cant just leave it there!!! Nooo!! It was soooooooooooooooooooo good!!! Ooh gods please update soon, I loved the cliffe. Well, I loved what happened, It makes me want to pluck my eyebrows out that its a cliffhanger.... kind of a love/hate relationship. Lol.

Love the fic! Cannot wait to read more!!! - Jessica

this sounds intresting which side will harry choose?
i like draco getting along with harry

().()! YOU! ARE! A! VERY! EVIL, EVIL! PERSON!!!! I really HATE cliffys!!!!! The\'re EVIL!!! Like you!!! On an other note! ^_^ THANK YOU OH, SO MUCH!!!!!!! (I\'m pretty sure you know what for ^_~!) An slighty OOC Draco is comptely ok.....really I kindda like him like that anyway ^_^! If I wasn\'t in a liebarry (yes I know thats not how its sp but i like it that way...) I would be jumping up and down in my chair!!! *Me: Jump, jump! ^_^ Liebarry Person: Shhh!!!! Me: -.-:....Damn.* Ok! Now I\'m rabbleing! For my end note *Me: Lala!! LP:Shhhhh!!!! Me:......evil...bwahahaha!!! -this said in a hushed tone ^.^- I win!* PLEASE PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
LOVEYourStory!!!
Miss War-chan ^_~

\'Chapter One\' was really good and the Cliffie wasn\'t so bad, but damn, this story is really intriguing.

You\'ve managed to get most of the personalities fairly well, even though I don\'t agree with Severus being Draco\'s godfather.....anyways.....

The drama you\'ve built up is terrific. I wonder why Harry is rooming with Draco instead of his longtime friend, Ron? Does that little bit of trust Harry has for Draco part of it??? Why is Ron so \'out-of-it\'?

....and who is this person from the blue light??????

Please update sooner, please?????

EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! T_T *grumble grumble* Still, very nice piece.

\'Hook, line, and sinker....You cought me! ^_^ Very nice start! Can\'t wait till the next UPDATE!!!! One thing...the point to this is that we (the readers) are not suppost to know if this will be Dark!Harry, Light!Harry, or *hopfuly* a loupol (I can\'t sp for the life me *sigh*) at where there \"Might\" be a Blance. Whatever happens thou I\'m sure it\'ll be good (be it by just telling that your starting line!) ^_^ There\'s one small thing I\'d like to know, when it comes to the slashy part....who will on the bottom/top? Because a ukey Sev is my fav! There\'s SO few of them!!!.....ummm...I just remembered that you said/typed that you\'ll be keeping them in IC sooo....I\'m guessing that Sev\'s not going to be uke *disapionted sigh*....OH WELL! ^_^ ANYway! Love it so far and Please UPDATE soon ^___^!!!!

Ja ne
I\'mAGuppyWhenItComesToGoodStories!
Miss War-chan ^_~

WOW O_O

I\'m just amazed! This is so different, I\'ve never heard a plot like this. A fight over Harry\'s soul between a devil (I think) and an angel? WOW. THis is such a great start, I can\'t wait for more.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL

I am certainly interested in reading this. I understand introductions are never very long. My opinion is that they are as they are named. They introduce you to the story and lead you into the larger parts. An Introduction is merely to pull in a reader, the chapters are to capture the reader\'s imagination.

Anyways, I\'m rambling about non-sense. Please post the next chapters soon. =^.^=

This is Different!

Starting off with a Heaven/Hell bargain for Harry\'s soul is a good starting prologue. At first it was hard to grasp what exactly was going on, trying not to confuse the acting characters, thank you only two were present *whew*, and that jab about Middle Earth I thought I fell into a LotR story!!!....but no, I continued and found an intelligently written introduction with some unusual twists to it. Harry gets to train for just a few months in Hell??? How does he get there, then back?? if he wants the side of the light?? Oh, sorry, that\'s the story part...*hee hee*

Devil\'s Snare, nice title pun - lol

Can\'t wait for more....for your first fic, this is definately different, but fun to read. Please, continue.