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love it , update please!

YAY!!! Much lovies to you! Please continue and update as soon as possible! Also, I'm kind-of curious as to why Harry hasn't taken back control from Avenairu, but I'm sure I'll find out in the next chapter! Awsome work. I can't wait to read more!! Loves Rowan!

i really like the story. Ron's such freaking whiny brat!!!!! makes me sick listening to him! just hex the little shit already!!!

hope you post soon!!!

Fantastic i absolutely love this story and your idea is fantastic, and Snape dosen't diserve anything although he is still my fave character in HP! Wonder what his title going to be?

Email me when theres an update please: vicky_robinson_1990@hotmail.co.uk

abso-bloody-lutely amazing!!!!! I impatiently await what happens next

i look forwar to your next chapter update!! please update soon!!

Loved the story and it's most recent development. Love the sword play scenario.

I'm glad that you'll be developing Harry and Snape's relationship over the next while.

Can't wait and Thanks soooo much for the email update notice.

This is very good, though I'm sure you know that. I like that Harry and Snape haven't simply jumped into bed together after first eye-contact. That they might develop a relationship is much more believable and enjoyable. Please update soon.

Hey I really love your story. I hope you update soon. Do you have any tips for a new not very good writer? I would appreciate some advice. I love writing, but I just can't seem to carry on a plot line. Anyways, thanks for the good read. It's been a while since I've found a good story.

keep up the good work

-potionsmaster35

I've JUST got my computer back!! And I got the very lovely surpise that your story updated when my com died on me(your the 1st story that I checked.)! I am slightly wanting the loven between Harry and Severus to hurry along, but you do have a point that going slowly makes it seem more realistic. I too hate Ginny and I'm VERY glad that she is almost no where in your story ^_^. Btw My b-day was Nov.11 (I'm lucky, having a no school day for a b-day! ^-^). On Harry's wings I was a little confused, are they angelic wings though black? do they look like cystile*sp* feathers? spikey or soft? I just pictured a mix (this is what I usely do when I'm not sure about somthing in a story)=soft for the body of the feathers but a spikey-like top part and tips*which I imaged the spikes shoting out of*. I'm not sure I'm right....ANY~way! I actully am hopeing that Ron (nasty Weasle!) does not get over whatever he's going through, I mean, who would WANT to keep a friend that keeps such an problem as high as that? "Oh! your richer than me? I hate you. Your famus!? I really hate you. Oh! You have an other personalty thats a demon and can kill me at any time that you lose controll? I fear you now so, I hate you." Now tell me who would REALLY want that friend!?
But this is all besides the point that I review........PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! *do author's EVER get tired of seeing that? ^_~)

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