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for Not My Father\'s SON

by CanadiangirllovesHP

person sadpanda
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally someone yells at hermione about the house elves. it\'s always bothered me the way she does that. this is a great story.
person Missi
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chap 25 is AWESOME! Remus\' so sweet, but I\'m dreading the inevitable \"Red Head Ron\" moment-he\'s being a moron, I can just feel it. Can\'t wait for the next update, and thanks for this one!
person Missi
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, TFF. Not a pawn-I love it! These updates rocked-I can\'t wait for the next installment! This fic is so amazing, thanks so much for writing it!!
person Missi
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for updating! Poor Remus, having to transform. Poor Harry, having to be a performing bear. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Missi
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They are such a cute couple, and I can\'t wait to see if Moony likes his little friend. I sure hope they don\'t have an Alpha fight or something. Anyway, *squeal* thank you so so much for the yummy smuttiness action! This update was great-I can\'t wait for the next one!
person sbkar
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven review: Harry blew them away! I love how he stood up for himself, and his arguments were very lucid.
person sbkar
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Eight review: You have a consistent way of spelling \"expect\" with and \"s\"; take out the \"s\" and it\'s fine.

Formatting issues with this chapter, huh? The lines were so long...
person sbkar
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Ten review: rod iron ... you meant \"wrought iron\", right?
person Missi
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! They\'re finally getting their act together! OMG I loved this update and SO can\'t wait for more!
person Missi
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tell em, Harry! Sorry, got a little carried away there. This update was awasome! I can\'t WAIT for the next one!