rate_review Reviews

no not impossible. to tell you the truth i was waiting for a sex or kiss scene. how pathetic can i get? but this was just as good. it was very heartwarming and feeling. i wonder why harry was crying perhaps sirius or he could have loved draco. anyway i know that this will turn into a lovely relationship whether you decide to continue it or not. it was very nice.

Fine little story for sure. You sounded in your authors notes as if you are of different origin then english so please be proud, for you have done a good job of writing. It was quite clear and uncomplicated in understanding all that you were trying to portray.Keep writing and have fun and though critisism is important try to stay true to yourself and not let anyone change your story just because its not going the way that want it to.

LMAO Ron\'s out cold. You did a great job.

this is great.... yea... more would be good.. your english wasn\'t as bad as some people who it is their first language....
keep up the good work..

It was awsome!! I think you should definitly continue it and don\'t worry about your english it was fine. Update soon!!!