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yum! that was nice, bittersweet. ^_^

I could do with more.

A bit more backstory, and a bit of what is to come.

Its almost as thoug this is a short scene in a much longer fic

That was so sweet!!!!! I loved it.....

Really nice, and well explained. I understood everything that you were trying to portray. It truly shows a good writer when you don\'t have to try to figure out just what the author is trying to say. I do hope that you continue this story. One of the things that keeps me from ever writing a story is having a different idea than what is already out there. The fact that you have one for yourself is lucky indeed. Let\'s see that imagination at work and show us some story elaboration, can\'t wait.

I loved it =D

I like it and I would like to read more, with whipped cream, and Harry and Draco on top of course - but please, no cherry for me, I prefer strawberries :-))

That was great! I like it the way it is, but I woul work well with another chapter or two. Perhaps the next one could start like the next morning and feel more in the present. What I would really like to see is Draco suddenly stops making progress for whatever reason and Harry\'s crushed as a result. Then, after seeing how down he is Draco remembers some more and comes out to comfort him. Oh yeah, they should destroy Voldemort too.

I would find sollice in the rain. Ducks, it\'s \"solace\".

Touching, and sweet.

That is so adorable! You HAVE to carry on with it, I really want to know what happens now.