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for Black Heart

by Qmouse

person sheila
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW I have just read this in one sitting and I am impressed!!! You are doing a wonderful job, thank you for sharing this with us.
person Barbara
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. Looking forward to more updates.
person firewall
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - I am always happy when I see that you have written another chapter for us. This one especially poignant as she walked on broken glass trying to keep the peace. She seems to know intuitively how to handle him however.

I hope RL improves for you soon and things look up.
person firewall
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - Ahhh, the plot thickens! I\'m assuming the relatively quiet interlude Hermione and Severus have been enjoying is about to be broken. Your story is building nicely. I am looking forward to reading more. I hope you are able to post quickly as you\'ve really got me hooked.
person ancientgirl
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you updated. I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter.
person Raven
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my, hope you\'ll update soon. Throughly enjoying the story, especially the way Hermione is gradually coming to appreciate the man behind the mask *sappy grin* Looking forward to more
person Laura
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, c\'mon! Where\'s the update? This is really excellent and I want to read MORE,lol! Bring it....please!
L
person Maria
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very, very promising - please keep going.
person Laura
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. I like the pacing and the buildup of trust between them. I hope you update soon- it\'s really one I want to read more of!
L
person Barbara
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. Keep posting.