rate_review Reviews

cute very cute

I loved it completely.^_^
It thrilled me so much.
Great really

Butterfly Beauty

I am sure that I have read and reviewed this on another fanfic site but hey ho, I'll do it again because it was so bloody good.

This is a fantastic story that is extremely emotive. I felt Harry's pain for his unrequieted love. Words that can make you feel; that's powerful writing!

it\'s a good story, I like the angst that goes around harry and severus. It\'s cool to have severus act like that. ehehhe.

That was soooo seductive and real, like I\'m groaning now!!! *Oh My!* You\'re writing style is absolutely dead on for all the characters, even McGonagall! *snickers*

...and the sex was amazing, just f*****g amazing!!! The drunk Severus was just as I would imagine him, pushy, demanding and downright lustful! *OH MY!* I\'m swooning just thinking about it.

Bloody Brilliant!!! All of it!! The rational, the words, the feelings, all of it just brilliant!!! .....and to put it all into just one chapter, it had drama, angst, humour, romance and all the good stuff. Did I say Brilliant??? YES!!! BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!

wow, this story was soo good. i actually felt my heart hurting when harry was in full angsting mode. i loved Severus\' reactions and the utterance of mine!

The story was wonderful. Do you have a beta? There were just a few words/phrases that were overused at times. But please don\'t think that I am denigrating your effort. It was a beautiful, touching story. And the smut was good too! :D

wonderful... simply wonderful.. taht is possibly the best oneshot i have ever read... :)

What a wonderful one shot, Brilliant. Thank you.

oh- that was cute.