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for In The Sex

by Qestral

person wudelfin
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now that must be one of the best sex scene for this couple yet
person tabitoo
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was nice. Glad it was Draco.
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!
person ChasteBlush
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good, good, good, i\'m bit pissed so i\'ll leave it at that for now, but this is very good. welld one,
mwah
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person Bambu
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is simply superb. You\'ve done a wonderful job with the ambiguity of the narrator\'s identiry... it could so easily have been Ron, but it\'s obviously someone who knows her well. I particularly like the untutored narrative voice. There is a sweetness (without being cloying) about Draco\'s participation that suggests a far more intimate relationship that simple lust, and it\'s quite endearing. It\'s quite nice to see how well you illuminate Hermione\'s character in such a short vignette, and it was a delight to read.
person Bambu
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should have proof-read my last review... apologies all around.
person dragon34
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even prim and proper people need to get down and dirty sometimes. She chose the right person, and the right place.
person whogirl
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is such a sweet story. Good job!
person Rachel
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow I did not think of Draco But what a twist
person Bargle5
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has quickly become one of my favorite fics. Great job, Qestral. I\'ve added it as one of my recommended stories. :-)