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for In Control

by Qestral

person Trelweny
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If only it worked so well... or maybe I'm just missing even the dreams.

Wonderfully done. It would have been interesting had Hermione delved further into why her thoughts kept coming 'round to Draco in such a way.

Thanks for writing.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person nrvana06
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I HOPE ITS NOT A ONE-SHOT I THINK THIS STORY HAS RGEAT POTENTIAL PLEASE!!! UPDATE
person Bargle5
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good one, Qestral. Being that I\'m not a Hermione/Draco fan, it was fun to see you use the dream as a way for Hermione to have him without having to try to come up with a believeable scenario for them to get together. Dream Draco can act any way you like without being out of character. Clever.
person {~Invisible_Reviewer~}
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^.~
That was excellent. I\'ve never seen Hermione portrayed that way. Good job!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written, and the dream part was quite a refreshing alternative to all the not-so-realistic fics out there. Just wanted to point out, though, that a woman is fertile only around the time she ovulates (a few days before and only for about 24 hrs after). So post-ovulation there won\'t be much point to her... arousal :-) (Don\'t mean to get so technical, but the timing _is_ a vital part of your story.)
person dragon34
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With a castle full of hot guys, she has more control then I ever would have. I was just getting frusterated just reading it. Lovely piece of work.
person Gentileschi
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please continue!
person Ayanna
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, witty, little story. Now could we have some real action? Maybe Hermione\'s satisfied, but I\'m not.
person lrnd
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i enjoyed it ... will there be a sequel out of control where she basically jumps draco ...;p