rate_review Reviews

It's a really good thing that you have not written anything else....sicko

Terrible unrealistic story. Your grasp on the English language is also very poor

funny! good plot keep writing! please do check grammar and use spellcheck if u have it. It would be a nicer read without the mistakes.

This is one of the best comedies I've ever read. Oh, I'm sorry. You didn't mean for it to be a comedy?

This is the one of the most pathetic attempts I've ever read. Buy a dictionary. Buy a book on grammar. Buy a book on punctuation. Read them. Use them.

Do not write your fantasies. You have pathetic ones.

Now, where's that gong?

Well, you said you wanted people who read it to review. Honestly, I only read the beginning. It was so badly written with all the grammar faults (is it your first language?) that it made me sick. Also, what\'s with the punctation? It really irritates me, to be reading like this all the time, when the sentence has already stopped, yet you continue the sentence, with another set of information, here\'s an example of how annoying that can be, do you notice? And oh my god .. you dubbed it \'The Ginny Cunt\'. I laugh. Write better next time - much better.

Its an interesting concept, but you really need to get someone to beta this who speaks and writes english as a native. The spelling and grammar have some major issues. You also should work on pacing and plausibility. The paradox really makes things difficult and you need to figure a way to work around that.

the storyline its self is fine, but you should really, really, really find a beta reader. the grammer and punctuation errors are so bad, i can\'t even see past them. i\'m guessing that english is not your first language, but if you go to http://www.portkey.org, you can find lots of people who are willing to beta read.

OMG!!! THAT WAS SO GOOD! I had no idea that it wasn\'t Peeves raping her since the whole thing set it up like that! Seriously, that was crazy insane, but I loved it! Love your writing, continute to do more because you\'re a great writer. :-)

k

I really liked it. Ultimate revenge. Maybe you should have Malfoy over hearing Ginny talk about it to someone. Maybe you could have Ginny tell Hermione the truth about what she did, thats how Malfoy hears.