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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=/ In the begining you were going at such a good pace, and then near the end the suspense and astonishment just dwindled. overall, this a good story, great introduction, great climax, but the falling action might need a little work. Maybe a little on Dracos part, and it is very out of character for Lucius to kill his son, regardless of how cruel he is.
You're a great writer though! I love your skill!=D
You're a great writer though! I love your skill!=D
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was wow.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow so depressing and tragic.... yet i think i like it
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s sorta sad! well it was well written. good work!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sad, and dark... but a winner none the less. I really found this fic unique and I do hope that you have many more DM/HG stories to follow. Bravo!