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person Anijade
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was priceless just to see Lucius pass out! Well done
person Danielle
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, you have to make a sequel!!! Please :)
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is such a great, well-written story. I simply loved it. The whole Narcissa POV was very creative, and a good change of pace for typical D/Hr fics. I was especially fond of her last comment and the reaction it obtained from Lucius, haha. Anyway, good job!
person ancientgirl
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. I like how you made Narcissa stop Lucius dead in his track. Are you planning something more for this? I\'m looking forward to it if you do.
person MysticAngel77
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious ending!! I haven\'t seen anything like this story yet in all my readings of HG/DM pairing fics, I really wish you would make this into a larger story because it has great potential.
person mstrsofmayhm
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahaha. i likee. :]
person Know-It-All
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How exciting! Narcissa on Hermione\'s side? That\'s so awesome! I can\'t wait to read more.
person geo
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet I like it how you brought the characters to life in one chapter. Thanks

geo~
person Lyndie578
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! \"Future daughter-in-law\" indeed. You\'ve left me smiling. Loved to watch it from Narcissa\'s POV. Thanks for the post!
person bubbles
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I *love* you. That was wonderful and Narcissa was portrayed fantastically. She was so cold yet so motherly and loving. A job well done.

When are you gong to update Obscurity though?