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person Mandi
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very much enjoyed this! Great little story with the perfect ending. :)
person Loziana
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would absolutely love to read a sequal to this one shot just to see if narcissa is right that hermione is her future daughter in law. Great lead in for the story would be just after the dance and narcissa and hermione\'s mother talking to each other or their respective children. Just a thought.
person Tinkerbelle
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I liked; very subtle, and I loved the insinuations. Only a mother eh?? Gotta love the \"attention to details\"...

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person K
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the ending. Very cute!
person megan
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic, the last part was so funny with draco\'s father fainting! it would be nice to see a sequal to this fic.
person lisae34
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao. love your narcissa
person DragonApocalypse
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue continue(i know you wont) but continue and yes i know its a one shot that was such an interesting point of view
narcissa is usually portrayed as weak and submissive i lov the way you set this awsome job
person dw
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great! Good described chemistry between Hermione and Draco - and an unusual but fascinating point of view.
person Rei
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah! This has the best ending sequence. You certainly brought a smile to my face.
person CM
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE THIS! I started laughing at the end! It\'s soooo cute! Muahahaha ..behold the mother\'s intuition. Muahahahaha! Heee. Keep up the good work!