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person Clementina
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn\'t really sure about this fic at first but I enjoyed it when I read it it\'s really awesome...but the part that got me was this \"
person lorett
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!

\'He had no words for her, he had fainted dead away.\' LOL! Oh, Rain, you\'re just priceless, do you know that!

Lovely. I really like your descrption of Hermione\'s hair and the way that Draco\'s eyes never left Hermione\'s when they danced.

Great job!

I\'ll be visiting you at Dangerous Liaisons.

Cheers,

L
person Truth44 not logged in
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God! This was totally awesome!! I so loved it! Everything was great about this--i LOVED Narcissa\'s observations!!! Really well written. And when Malfoy smashed that glass--God, you had me on edge! Wonderful work here!
person bubsangel
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! That was awesome. I normally don\'t read one shots but that just caught my eyes. I really wish you would continue this....
Bubs
person Shauna
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE A SEQUAL!!!!!!! ITS WONDERFUL!!!
person curlyq2713
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good
person Elmo
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u totally deserve that award! its the best story i\'ve read! still hoping 4 a sequel though...
person Mieko
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEST ENDING EVER!! : )
person J.N. Cahill
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your story because I plan to vote on Dangerous Liaisons. I thought this was very good and kept in character except for Lucuis (I always suspected he would be more evil) but I still liked it very much! Good luck at winning! :-)
person Persia
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short but delightful! Your description of their dance and the end were particularly good!