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person Anon
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, especially the ending!
person D1M3
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! I loved the last part! And oh my...this story is absolutely romantic...well the dancing part is and the way they looked at each other. The first thing my reaction was \"Awww...\" then i laughed so hard when it came to the last 2 sentences.
person anonymous
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! It\'s got a, I don\'t know what the word is, the only one that comes to mind is suave, feel to it. Elegant. I like it. It would\'ve been an interesting story though... Nonetheless, I love it.
person Kelly
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful.
And I definitely did NOT expect the last line! :-)

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person kurtcouper
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous! I can\'t think of another word to describe this. I love how it\'s told by a third point of view. Very unique. Only things a mother would notice. Ah, sooo good. <3Kc
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he fucking fainted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mwaahhahahahahah. that was unbelievable hilarious. WOOTS
person HiddenAllusion
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I love it... amusing and entertaining and fluffy without being sickly. Thank you
person Kitsuneneko
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* *lmao* That was just great. You really should add on to this! mwahaha
person hasapi
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hah! That is hilarious. Truly, truly excellent. *giggles* And actually, possibly not too far off a characterization for Narcissa...(after reading HBP...)
person ali
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! I loved it! The only story on here I\'ve ever reviewed! please make this longer! A*!