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person Nancy
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful descriptions. I loved the ending, it was the perfect fit :)
person Nem
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely. simply lovely. humorous and heart-wrenching. You portrayed his feelings exactly (and almost made me weep) when Draco shattered the glass, seeing Hermione being touched by another man. You\'re an expert writer.
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was wonderful i really wish there was more like it here on aff. I loved the way you were able to envest such energy into a third person account, really it was well done! Tasteful as well and Narcissa had a subtle humor that was fun too. I\'ll have to go see what else you have written :)
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant!

Go Narcissa! *sigh*, poor Draco. His dad is such a bastard, but your Narcissa sounds like she could handle him. Great fic!
person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really think that you should continue this story It could keep going its really good!
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go with it! I really like it and I hope you add more chapters soon. When Lucius fainted, I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair. I love the detail you put into the story. If you want you could read and review my story? It\'s a Draco/Hermione called \"The Games We Play\" I have had all good reviews so far. ttyl.
person KageMage15
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol poor Mr.Malfoy.
person Aphrodite
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love your little thing. I\'m not sure if it\'s a story but I love it.
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Oh, please have a sequel!! *goes to check*
person Kat Murphy
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Beautiful. \"He had fainted dead away.\" More stories should end with Lucius in that position. And wonderful portrayal of Narcissa. I don\'t know how accurate-as far as the Muggleborns, dead on with Draco-, but fabulous anyway. Great story.