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schedule July 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Very nice!!!

person Jessica
schedule January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was perfect. Positively brillante.
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent. I would love to read more. LOL@ Lucius fainting. This is how I like Narcissa written.
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful oneshot. I especially loved the way Narcissa put Lucius in his place. Well-played! Thanks for sharing.
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story several times and I absolutly love it, it is probably one of my favorite one shot stories ever!
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah... I've read this before, and it's still brilliant. The only regret is that 'fainted dead away' is probably not literal.
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never imagined to find something so short, but so sweetly hilarious. I love the last bit, and how observant and defensive Narcissa is. ^-^ <3
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I *love* it. OMG, it was so good, I especially love how you ended it and loved what she said to Lucius. Best story I've read in a long time. Kudos.
person skye
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bwhaaaaaaa!!!! Loved the point of view, and Lucius' faint, yee gods I could see the eyes rolling back and the swirl of hair as he dropped!!!
person Christina
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this on fanfiction.net dozens of times and it never gets old! I love it!