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for Human Fallibility

by snarkytheclown

person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ~*~Tasha~*~
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice use of flashbacks. Beautiful piece. Emotional ... realistic for the characters as well. Excellent.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lily
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love that when I read your stuff I never want the story to end. I can\'t wait to read more of what you declare is not a literary masterpiece.
person Shadowknight
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite a nice little one chapter story. I do hope you continue to write either nore with this, or other stories. Tis more than good enough on it\'s own merits. :)
person Draccy
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me likey! If you want you can send me the file to it, although I won\'t be able to take it to Florida with me. My mum has a nasty habit of snooping through my things, see, and she\'d have a shit fit if she found it.

How many times do I have to tell you not to say not to expect a literary masterpiece? More often then not, people won\'t read it if they think that you think it\'s not worth reading. I mean, I know they\'re worth reading, but potential fans may not realize that.

You ought to post this on ff, you really should.
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... It took me quite a while to read your story, but it was worth every second. It has a good plot and is beautifully written.