rate_review Reviews

I am Romanian, and all this chapter\'s effect war ruined by your translation. Basically, translating into English from Romanian, the first rows are like this:

warrior thing, friend release, in the cat darkness land - journey to stop

friend follow surely, to take care next to they

he face now vine

bakes he dead

he thing

journey in the cat darkness land
... etc. Some of the words don\'t even exist in Romanian...

Needless to say, I was rolling on the floor laughing by the time I finished. If you want, I can give you the proper translation, and though I can\'t say I\'m an expert, at least it won\'t sound ridiculous.

Overall, one of the greatest story I\'ve ever read.

I think you need to clarify what Severus thinks of Dumbledore. Does he despise him, but obeys his orders because he must, or does he respect him but becomes infuriated from time to time? Because at the moment it seems he swings from one to the other with no apparent reason other than the needs of the plot.

Does your muse require more warm brownies, ice cream and chocolate syrup drizzled over the top??????????????/

Oh that is just CRUEL to end the chaptor like that!! This has become one of my favorite stories on the site, and i eagerly await the next update! So update SOON!!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, baby this is fantastic, better than the first time i reasd it by far, you#\'ve achieved your mission, you made the chapter great, my God thats got to be Voldemort, obviously, and jesus, the carnage, i like the way Snape turns to look at it and realises how hopeless the situation is, how awful such lose of life is. oh its so terrible, they\'re all dead, they never stood a chance.
i\'m sorry its taken me so long to leave you a review, i\'ve been so busy as you know, now i\'ve got an hour to myself so i thought i\'d do this and tell you what i think.
Definatly an excelllent chapter, loving the Dillon coming on to Severus bit, that was good and so artfully handled by Severus. And Voldemort at the end, that was good, Hello Harry potter, poor boy, poor poor boy. I wondder what he\'kll say to him now then. the whole vampire idea, the kid and everything was very good, well thought of, especially love this kid, so sweet, so innocent, a ray of hope for AHrry, if he cant come out of this alive for Severus, he hasnt to stay alive for the kid, he needsd a father now. Lol.
Anyway update soon, please,
Luv you hun,
ChasteBlush (formerly Dracosbitch)
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mwah x
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mmmm... I want more?! more more more more more more more... yeah I think we get the picture... ^_^ Great job!

Rose

please, please,PLEASE, poast the next chapter soon. I love this fic

nercomi X_X

*claws at the screen* What! You can`t just leave it there! I need to know what happens...... *stares at the screen hoping another chapter will pop up*

Keep up the good work....

hello Moldyshorts

Bloody brilliant! Cant believe you stopped there though. That was evil. Im dying for the next chapter.