schedule
November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me Harry was saved by Dumbledore's mass apparation!!!!
This was tightly written and well worked out.
Your friends must be very proud of what you created.
I'd tell them "Thank You" from a loyal reader who hadn't yet given up hope.
This was tightly written and well worked out.
Your friends must be very proud of what you created.
I'd tell them "Thank You" from a loyal reader who hadn't yet given up hope.
schedule
November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL! Evil author, leaving the story to a point where one should absolutely keep reading. If it were a book, no one would put it down at this point. A wery good story I have to say. Please update soon.
schedule
November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD UPDATE!!!!!! This is amazing, fantastic, spectcular, great, awsome, I can't think of any more words but I love this and can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
schedule
November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very mean place to end the chapter at! Please update again soon.
schedule
November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Can not believe you finished there, how could you, what of Harry, poor darling Harry, probably dieing under that rubble, poor poor boy, so innocent, so loved.
Brillaint the way you turned love against Voldemort though, i liked that, such a simple answer to something thats been such a problem, really turns the whole afraid of Voldy thing on its head. ~Thank goodness you got that child to safety, Harry would have been so upset and i would have been too. Severus and Lupin killed Draco, how could you, poor Draco, poor poor misguided boy.
Then theresthe school, completly destoryed and so quickly, so many people trapped inside the rubble, so manmy people dead or dieing, so much destruction, this is Hogwarts, unbreakable Hogwarts, its so terrible, so so terrible.
Brilliantly well written, kept my attentuion the entire time, kept reading too fast trying to find out what happened i was so terrified it was going to go wrong and yet i know the story line.
I will congratulate you especially on the Killing of Voldy, i thought that was brillaintly done, i mean, you used such a simple answer to such great affect, it made the entire death of Voldemort seem so powwerful,
LOVE CONQUERS ALL
lovely message to send out, so well written, the whole bantering between Voldy and Harry was brillaint too, i loved the way Voldy tried to attack him psycologically from every angle, from his parents, severus, his dreams even, seemed very in charcter the entire time, Voldy was very Voldy.
I thought this was one of the most exciting chapters you've ever written, you've got a great plot line, a great way of making the characters themselves in situations you wouldnt expect, you bring it alive brillaintly.
Well done baby,
MWAH
ChasteBlush (a very excited.)
x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x
Can not believe you finished there, how could you, what of Harry, poor darling Harry, probably dieing under that rubble, poor poor boy, so innocent, so loved.
Brillaint the way you turned love against Voldemort though, i liked that, such a simple answer to something thats been such a problem, really turns the whole afraid of Voldy thing on its head. ~Thank goodness you got that child to safety, Harry would have been so upset and i would have been too. Severus and Lupin killed Draco, how could you, poor Draco, poor poor misguided boy.
Then theresthe school, completly destoryed and so quickly, so many people trapped inside the rubble, so manmy people dead or dieing, so much destruction, this is Hogwarts, unbreakable Hogwarts, its so terrible, so so terrible.
Brilliantly well written, kept my attentuion the entire time, kept reading too fast trying to find out what happened i was so terrified it was going to go wrong and yet i know the story line.
I will congratulate you especially on the Killing of Voldy, i thought that was brillaintly done, i mean, you used such a simple answer to such great affect, it made the entire death of Voldemort seem so powwerful,
LOVE CONQUERS ALL
lovely message to send out, so well written, the whole bantering between Voldy and Harry was brillaint too, i loved the way Voldy tried to attack him psycologically from every angle, from his parents, severus, his dreams even, seemed very in charcter the entire time, Voldy was very Voldy.
I thought this was one of the most exciting chapters you've ever written, you've got a great plot line, a great way of making the characters themselves in situations you wouldnt expect, you bring it alive brillaintly.
Well done baby,
MWAH
ChasteBlush (a very excited.)
x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x
schedule
November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco really dead? Omg! It seems that Severus is killing everyone that he ever cared about. What happened to Harry? He's going to be okay, right? So many questions.
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Nemesis ^_~
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. It Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I just found it on AFF.net and was wondering if you were gonna finish it since it hasn't been updated in a while. I don't usually review since i feel that since i don't write i have no room to judge, but this story is excellent. I love it. Please let me know if u r gonna finish it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish it . I am hanging on the edge of my seat.
Thanks
Liz
Thanks
Liz
schedule
November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sigh just wishing for an update so harry can kill voldie and we can get on with sev/harry story...puppy eyes..update pretty please...
schedule
November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a great story please update soon ..i would like to read what will happen next ... keep up the great workamd later for now
angel
angel
schedule
November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story review asap