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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I can\'t wait for the Snarry and hope it will be soon.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really hot stuff and they\'re still in potions class.
Who was lurking in the Forbidden Forest in the opening sequence? I\'m guessing Severus or Voldemort.
Your work is very intelligent and as much as you could do research on Vampires, it will only be someone else\'s interpretation. You have an active imagination, so make it yours.
Well, written in an easy to follow style. Excellent!
So, don\'t leave us hanging here, please post more and soon!
Who was lurking in the Forbidden Forest in the opening sequence? I\'m guessing Severus or Voldemort.
Your work is very intelligent and as much as you could do research on Vampires, it will only be someone else\'s interpretation. You have an active imagination, so make it yours.
Well, written in an easy to follow style. Excellent!
So, don\'t leave us hanging here, please post more and soon!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thinkafter reading Severus\' little diatribe on the joys of the hunt I wouldn\'t mind being a vampire. You make it sound so enticing! Great job!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes, well... you asked for reviews... so I suppose I must review! *laughs* Well... this chapter seemed kinda rushed... maybe it was my imagination. I think so many things just happened at once... but it was good, it didn\'t really take away from the interest. Hopefully later chapters will be longer?
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this you have definately caught my attention. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh wow, I loved everything about this chapter. Youve put a lot of thought into this, and it is showing with rewards! I love it! I wonder how long it will take for Sev to realize that Harry is his mate, IF he is of course. If he isnt, I hope Harry becomes his donor or something. Yes either of those two would be nice .... sigh, yes nice. lol *buggering plot bunny eats brain away* love it! - Jess
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such an evil cliff !!! T-T
But it\'s a good chapter ! I love vampire!Severus ///>.< ///
He is so HOT *giggles*
Please, update soon !!!
But it\'s a good chapter ! I love vampire!Severus ///>.< ///
He is so HOT *giggles*
Please, update soon !!!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
off to an interesting start so far. I love Snape when he\'s a vampire. It\'s just hott. So please continue.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful beginning my friend... please update soon..
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, this is a very interesting story so far... *laughs* considdering it\'s only one chapter. Can\'t wait for more.