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for Crimson Regret

by CrimsonRegret

person Katie K
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story! I don\'t normally like this kind of story, but this one is really good. :-) Please update soon!
person Missi
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals, offering brownies, cookies, and a honey stollen* Thank you thank you thank you thank you for giving us this wonderful story! I can\'t wait for you to update again! This is so fabulous! I love it!
person Lisn
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOO GOOD!! MORE MORE MORE!!
person Angie/les`
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh how intriging. Come on keep going. Hurry up! Lol just thought i\'d give you a little rush on writing.
person antipyro
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is really good! Your research has done you justice.

You\'ve got me ready to slip off the edge of my chair with your tantalizing way of unhurried prose. It\'s as if trying to stretch every last emotion, thought and feeling into expression for us to swallow down and ingest with a sated feeling.

Wonderful!

You must post very soon, like anytime now would be good. Harry\'s little pause and Severus\' feelings just making themselves known - OH MY!!! Post soooooon!

*snickers* Severus jerking off on his couch!!! SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!
person Darkladyd
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhh, Snape as a vampire! I love it! Your story is very well thought out, and keeps a person on the edge of their seat. Please update soon, and if you need a Beta, I would be happy to help!

Darkladyd
person Menecarkawan
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two: I like this story. It\'s a rather different take on vampirism. Fascinating, really. I noticed a couple of words that weren\'t spelled wrong, but used in the wrong context. If you\'d a like a beta, I\'d be more than happy to do it for you. I find myself with too much free time anyway, seeing as typing for any extended period of time rather bothers my wrist, so finishing my own chapters as become somewhat troublesome. *sighs* Okay, I\'m certain that you don\'t care about that, so I\'ll continue...

Harry was sniffing the air... what is he exactly? Yes, yes, you can\'t answer that. Doesn\'t stop me from wondering, as it\'s painfully obvious that he\'s not entirely human. To me at least, though I could be wrong. I\'ll laugh hard if I am... laughing at myself is always fun. I do wonder what Severus is going to do when he discovers who his mate is. I hope he doesn\'t blow a gasket, though that would be funny. Update soon, my love.

Minn
person momoko
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Job! I really like this story! PLease update soon...dont make me beg...
god, I sound sooo desperate dont I?
Well, I am. YOUr story has made me desperate...ya happy now?
lol
update soon though
person momoko
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter