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I have to say that last chappie is a good read, though.

Dont stop!!! Keep going!!!

This is as close to a FLAME as I have ever written and it isn't even about your story..... The story while well written and well thought out only has a few things that I personally would change and all of that is wording. The BIGGEST issue I have is actually your habit of answering REVIEWS in your chapter posts. This is something that would be better done in email form privately than in your chapters. It deceives your readers into thinking that you have posted something of actual length when in reality the chapters are very short. Quit under estimating your story lines and delivery because it makes you seem very whiny. This is not something anyone wants to be seen as. I am not sorry if this hurts your feelings because it isn

Eep!! Thats quite possibly one of the worst cliff hangers I've ever read! It seems rather impossible for Harry to be alive, but then again stranger things have happened. I sincerely hope he's not dead. Sev and Harry have to end up all cute and happy together!! Other than that though, it was a pretty good chapter. I like the way you turned the killing curse around to make it more powerful with love. I can't wait for the next chapter, even if it will be the last one ::sobs:: I can't wait to read your next story!

Poor person...starving....Anyways the story was awesome!Please update!Thankyou!

Poor person...starving....Anyways the story was awesome!Please update!Thankyou!

please please please, you are being too cruel. You must finish this for us poor desperate readers out here. You can't leave us in suspense like this any more. PLEASE post the next/final chapter. PLEASE.

First off, This is a really good story, but I would recommend for reader's sanity that you post your Reveiw Responses at the END of the chapter.

I hope this is meant to be finished, because it's REALLY GOOD!
DKE

*screams* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*cries* I can't believe you stopped there on such a crucial poin!!!!!

*sniffles* I sat and read through the entire story in one go...and it END ON A CLIFFIE!!!!

*wails* nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!

you have to update!!!! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please....

Um...pretty please????

Liz

I didn't get past "my love" either. totally cracked me up. *snicker* that's so cute and soooooo creepy.

lovely story, otherwise.