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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOD i love it!!! MOre more more more...
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS!!! Please update soon!!!
~Katie K~
~Katie K~
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh that was exciting. I am guessing that Harry is a Veela. Hmm I always assumed that was for girls. Oh well. Severus feeding was exciting. Good job, keep writing. you are doing a good job.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**Wonders if this offering food thing will get us quicker updates, o.k. let\'s try it.** Waves a chocolate cake, cupcakes, cookies, and a bottle of rum for good measure under author\'s nose. \"See what you get, if we get an update soon?\"
Hehe, I just loved this update!! You write so wonderful, that it\'s a sin! I love the \"Harry smell Snape\" thingy, but I don\'t think he is a Vela?, that\'s too......easy. Maybe some type of hyber vampire thingy. But, if he does turn out that way, do I sense the first vampire/Vela? Hummmm, I also just thought about something.. It seems like an werewolf could have that type of super senses too, but why would he feel the need to suduce someone? Is he a male nympho in treatment? hehe Whatever he is, I have a feeling that Snape will not know what hits him, when they get together!!!
You have a wonderful grasp on writing, so imagative, so luring that you draw the reader in, almost like we were there when Snape was chasing that boy down the alley. I never thought for once that it was Harry, he would not do that! Harry would have turned around and fight to the end. At least that is the sense I get from how you are writing him. I mean he did go down and faced Snape for his freind! I could see Harry, in the condition he was in, instead face Snape and shove him against the wall, and start kissing him senseless!! That would have been a little soon thou. I have a feeling that when they do finally get together, with your writing ability, it will be one hell of a sex seane!!!
Please update soon, and I will keep cooking!
Hehe, I just loved this update!! You write so wonderful, that it\'s a sin! I love the \"Harry smell Snape\" thingy, but I don\'t think he is a Vela?, that\'s too......easy. Maybe some type of hyber vampire thingy. But, if he does turn out that way, do I sense the first vampire/Vela? Hummmm, I also just thought about something.. It seems like an werewolf could have that type of super senses too, but why would he feel the need to suduce someone? Is he a male nympho in treatment? hehe Whatever he is, I have a feeling that Snape will not know what hits him, when they get together!!!
You have a wonderful grasp on writing, so imagative, so luring that you draw the reader in, almost like we were there when Snape was chasing that boy down the alley. I never thought for once that it was Harry, he would not do that! Harry would have turned around and fight to the end. At least that is the sense I get from how you are writing him. I mean he did go down and faced Snape for his freind! I could see Harry, in the condition he was in, instead face Snape and shove him against the wall, and start kissing him senseless!! That would have been a little soon thou. I have a feeling that when they do finally get together, with your writing ability, it will be one hell of a sex seane!!!
Please update soon, and I will keep cooking!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot glad i won\'t be displeased awesome story by teh way and what is harry? is he ike a veela
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. keep updating I hope the next one comes out soon. Keep up the great work
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome start to your story, I loved it. ive never read a vampire story really and I hope they are all like this one. Okay yeah snape is extra creepy but is really totally cool. Oh and what\'s up with harry and seducing although I find that really funny and kinda wierd I like the idea. wow dumbledore has alot of secrets under his belt and no one has a clue. who is teaching dada? I hope it\'s remus. i never would have thought that snape would obliviate greanger but i guess he had too. of course moldy voldie shoud die and soon but what is snape gonna do when he finds out who his mate is? he can\'t tell voldie, can he? Oh well thats enogh of talking from me. Please please update soon cause I would really like to know what happens next.
TTFN ^-^ ^-^
TTFN ^-^ ^-^
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! MORE MORE MORE! What\'s up with Harry? I like your vampire Snape, he seems a bit darker than he is usually written. Keep it up.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter. I can\'t wait to see what the next chapter brings. I am kinda curious about the sniffing though.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can saya is OMG... that was an amazing chapter... whats up with harry tho??? *looks excited for next chapter*