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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee! This is so good! Sry I didn\'t see the last chapters were up till today, but hey, summer school sucks monkey wang like that. LOL! Sooo... there\'s gonna be sexy hotness soon, right? ^.^
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dunno, just the first time that he was explained it reminded me of jeepers creepers. LOL. It was quite an interesting thought. Well update soon. That was a really good chapter.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm...*raises hand* QUESTOION!!! Crimson I have a question... Who told Sev that he wasn\'t posing a threat or was that an inner voice....If the answer was there blame it on the heat.
*Huggles*
*Huggles*
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just lost posessive Serevus. Makes me happy. lol. I truely enjoyed this chapter!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see how Severus goes about courting Harry. Especially since he has only one week in which to do it. I also thought it was funny when Sev threw Dean for hitting on Harry, yes I\'m weird, and it was so sweet to read about Harry snuggling into Snape\'s robes.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waves hand* Oh, hardly! Absolutely NOTHING is wrong with this chapter! or any of the other ones for that matter. ^_^ I DID find a typo though! *laughs* It\'s hardly anything to write home about though. You just missed a \'to\' in there somewhere. No biggy. Everyone will still love you anyhow. ^_^ I really like how this turning out. I love how Harry turns into this neady little puppy when he\'s around Severus. *sighs* And your writing style is great too! Plus, it lacks major typos. ^_^ Something you don\'t see very often... -_-0
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah man you just love to torture us don\'t you? LOL great chapter poor Sev unable to claim Harry right away. I hop Hermione doesn\'t figure things out and open her mouth and say something before Sev can win Harry over.Sometimes she can be \"too smart\" for her own good. Update soon.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think dumbldor is completely blind to what is really going on with sev....hopefully no one else tries to come on to harry...although it would be funny to see what sev would do to draco if he made a pass at harry lol. can\'t wait for the next update.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! First time reading through what you have so far and it\'s brilliant! At first, I was thinking Harry was some sort of submissive succumbus with how everything was being played out, but that just shows how grand my guessing capabilities are. Were Cupidos your invention or were they already mystical creatures? I think I\'ve heard the word somewhere, but for the life of me I can\'t remember where.
Anyway, I\'m rambling. Excellant job and keep up the good work!
Anyway, I\'m rambling. Excellant job and keep up the good work!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Turning he realised he was still keeping a tight hold of Harry and held back a smile when he saw the boy burying his face in his robes and making contented little noises with his eyes closed.\"
That was so sweet! I can just see Harry snuggling into Severus.
You, my daer, must be one heck of a perfectionist. You write very well. Your sentence structure is wonderful. Little if any grammatical errors. Your writing is a pleasure to read. Dumbledore seems a bit odd, but when doesn\'t he? I love this fic!
That was so sweet! I can just see Harry snuggling into Severus.
You, my daer, must be one heck of a perfectionist. You write very well. Your sentence structure is wonderful. Little if any grammatical errors. Your writing is a pleasure to read. Dumbledore seems a bit odd, but when doesn\'t he? I love this fic!