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for Crimson Regret

by CrimsonRegret

person Angie/Les
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go you, you got another chapter out. Now do it again.
person Missi
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My stove\'s broken, so I can\'t burn dinner, but I did burn my hand. I was lighting one of the candles that sits on my comp table, and was doing the whole \"cup your hand around the fire thing\" and misjudged where the fire was, cause I was more interested in the story (don\'t worry, it\'s not bad). I love this story, it totally rocks! Thanks for updating!!
person myniephoenix
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor confused little harry.... awwwwww...... update again soon!!
person Raphael Argai Thanatos
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HARRY YOU BLASTED GIT!!! YOU HURT SNAPE\'S FEELINGS!!! I\'LL KILL YOU, THEN REVIVE YOU AGAIN AND MAKE YOU APOLOGISE TO HIM IN THE MOST INDECENT SCENARIO I CAN POSSIBLY IMAGINE!!!
Wonderfull chapter btw ^^ - good, healthy smut - VERY much to my personal liking!^^^^^^^^
person PJ
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chappie. Poor Harry doesn\'t know what is going on.... why doesn\'t he do a bit of investigating about himself and what he is that kind of irks me about some of the fics. Harry is this magical creature but he relies on someone else to give him information when he should actually do it himself then he can be sure to get all the facts. Anyway nice chapter I liked how Harry got the potion right and Hermione didn\'t because she is so \"into book info\" and not thinking for herself. Update soon
person Aline Potter
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here I am again!
I liked the smut.But I didn\'t like the end.How come Harry could anger Sevvy so much??
Poor Sevvy.
Well, I hope you post soon.
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person Hambares
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
anti-discomfort spell? What exactly did that do? I like the name though...anything to get rid of the sticky mess!
I hope Snape and Harry will talk and let Harry rectify his mistake in yelling at Snape. Don\'t suppose it will be that easy, eh?
By the way, one spelling mistake that I caught...\"serge\" should be surge. Love this!
person Bright One
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, but now I feel sorry for Snape. You will have to update soon and make sure that Harry makes it up to him. :)
person WretchedScar
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank MERLIN you updated at last! I want more - give me more damnit!

person woof
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
needs more smut & blood letting(of course).