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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutly loved it!! put please when are we going to get some action in the bedroom??
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
two things I\'d like to point out
1~ you have the center puncture not under glamour beofre Sev makes it
2~ if the \'square\' fades, houwe will the other vamps/whoever the mark is used to ward away or protect said individual from WHO\'s he is. You mentioned the mark is unique to each, so I\'d assume different Vamps know the marks of diff Vamps... so it\'d be more prudent to leave the entire mark (under glamour or something if need be, but still keep it in its entirety) as to not only mark that this i a Vamp\'s mate, but WHICH Vamp\'s mate
just my oppinion, don\'t take this as a flame or anything, as I love your fic.
~ladyE
1~ you have the center puncture not under glamour beofre Sev makes it
2~ if the \'square\' fades, houwe will the other vamps/whoever the mark is used to ward away or protect said individual from WHO\'s he is. You mentioned the mark is unique to each, so I\'d assume different Vamps know the marks of diff Vamps... so it\'d be more prudent to leave the entire mark (under glamour or something if need be, but still keep it in its entirety) as to not only mark that this i a Vamp\'s mate, but WHICH Vamp\'s mate
just my oppinion, don\'t take this as a flame or anything, as I love your fic.
~ladyE
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter from an awesome writer! but quick questiom, what\'s with hermione? is she like.. mad at harry or somehing? well, anyway, can\'t wait for more!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... have I mentioned that I absolutely LOVE this story?! Well, I do. :-)
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... that was absolutely lovely.... Now I\'m glad I didn\'t read chapter 9 until you put up 10! *laughs* I loved them! even if they were short^_^0
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gives the auther a piece of a newly baked applecake and a review.*
Ohhhh, I loved the way Snape through Harry down on his desk and marked him. By the way, what kind of mark did he make? He bit Harry (wish he`d do that to me), but he bitt him two times? Right?
Keep writing.
Ohhhh, I loved the way Snape through Harry down on his desk and marked him. By the way, what kind of mark did he make? He bit Harry (wish he`d do that to me), but he bitt him two times? Right?
Keep writing.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter! Can\'t wait for more
schedule
August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter...Is hermione going to be all snotty now or will she eventually grow up?
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here is another truck full of goodies for your ravenous appetite!!! See what happens when we ask you to not stop writing...? That\'s why we do it!!!
Great chapter and thanks soooo much for answering my questions, I really like to read them all.
Since Harry wants Severus and Severus wants Harry, will there be a dominant character in the relationship or will they take turns to bottom/top??? I\'m just wondering if the Vampire is more dominant, especially if Harry is smaller/younger and less experienced.
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you - you are really terrific for writing this fantastic story, plus being the wonderful person you are.....
I\'ll be waiting for the next posting.
Great chapter and thanks soooo much for answering my questions, I really like to read them all.
Since Harry wants Severus and Severus wants Harry, will there be a dominant character in the relationship or will they take turns to bottom/top??? I\'m just wondering if the Vampire is more dominant, especially if Harry is smaller/younger and less experienced.
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you - you are really terrific for writing this fantastic story, plus being the wonderful person you are.....
I\'ll be waiting for the next posting.
schedule
August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, i cant wait for the next chap. You are a brilliant writer!