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for Crimson Regret

by CrimsonRegret

person Angie/Les`
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo they\'re finally together. WOOT WOOT!! I think the mark sounds interesting. Well update again.
person Ryo
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s hot. lol I swear, I love Sevvie as a vampire. It\'s just. Yum. Oh yes... the spell is \"Avada Kedavra\", just so you know. But that was the only mistake I read. Other than that, awesome chapter and can\'t wait for the next one.
person nutmeg
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love vampire stories, and I\'ve just gotton into HP stories too...so i\'m totally into this! Write more please!

Rock on
person GetOutOfMyHead
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^
I don\'t have anything to say that makes sense - it\'s mostly happy grunting and bizare sounds. And giggling. Always giggles.
person Missi
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! Stupid Mione, nosy witch. Anyway, squee! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Catchfire
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please tell me that he\'s going to claim Harry in that other way now (aka fuck him excuse me make love to him) for days on end. I sure hope that its a friday that Snape picked to invite Harry to his quarters so that they can spend the entire weekend together. So when is Ron going to find out anyway? Oh who cares just please make them do it now. You couldn\'t have a better set up than this in this story and if you wait it wouldn\'t really make sense. In my opinion it sounded like when Harry said \"Yes..yes I want it.\" that he wasn\'t just saying yes to the final part of the mark but to more. So will Snape scoop him up in his arms and carry him to bed now? I noticed that Snape didn\'t come this time so is that a good sign? I really hope so. GREAT STORY, GREAT PLOT, GREAT WRITING BUT EXTREMELY CRUEL CLIFFHANGER THIS CHAPTER. so please HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ps KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING
person PJ
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter I am glad Harry didn\'t get too upset and took the more \'mature\' route. And about Harry doing research I do see your point about him being busy saving himself or others. And it is not like he could see into the future and know what is going to happen and research that ahead of time. Also I don\'t think his relatives let him so stuff like that over the summer. Maybe Harry should request a \"time turner\" so he could have time to research things. About Hermione I don\'t understand why she is giving Harry the cold shoulder but I am sure it will be explained. I did like what Severus said to Harry about maybe being young but not weak that was sweet. I look forward to the next update.
person woof
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Warm, gooey chocolate chip cookies fresh out of the oven for you !!!!!! Would you like hot chocolate or icy cold milk with your cookies?????? Thanks for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person tessa3
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well ... that was intense.. sucks the way they had to tell Harry but things happened. and whatis up with Herms?? friends or no friends.. she should at least speak tohim instead of glaring and giving him the cold shoulder? Do i detect a hint of jealously... or is it something more *shurgs*
person Lioncourt
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT. Simply stunning. This is just the sort of fic I\'ve been waiting for. It\'s fabulous! I have always liked the idea of Snape as a vampire, and I find it easy to relate to both him and Harry. You\'ve done a great job, and I cant wait to read more of it. I could barely restrain myself from jumping up and down in delight when I discovered you had updated. More!