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On with the SMUT!!!!!

*pouts* See..the author is evil, leaving us dangling there as Severus is JUST about to claim Harry once again! lol.....You\'ve seemed to have balanced the semi-submissive and semi-dominate Voldie quite well. Congrats to you, as not many authors are able to do this while writting a good Voldemort. I am eagerly awaiting more of your story and shall once again fade into shadows to wait for your next installment.

Anubis

Agh! I have to wait until next chapter for delicious smutty smutness? Great chapter, loved the end of it.

SQUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *faints!* ohhhhh! That is just wonderful and terrible mean to end like that! lol. :D Ahhhhh this makes me feel all nice and unwound since school started. Ahhhh...Your story does wonders for me. lol. *hugs you* It\'s getting so good! SWEET HOT MAN SEX!!! lol.

Voldemort better keep his hands off of Harry\'s Severus! Yeah I know what he\'s thinking!


Voldemort\'s thoughts: I want some of that ass.

Well we all know he can\'t have any! mwahhaha...sorry hyper and extermly happy with this story! I luv your story! *nods* *hugs you again* Keep up the great work!

Please say that you will be continuing this last scene in the next chapter!

ok i love this story as you know!! i have to say while i get the whole marking the mate i was wondering, if harry has found his mate dose he need to take the potion?!! just a thought!! oh and i have to ask how long untill a realy male on male sex scene i realy wont one!! what can i sya male on male turns me one!!! lol!! great chapter and i love this story so orgininal!! hey how long will this be because you will eventual run out of lyric but uptill then cant wait for you next chapter and what the title wil be!! lol!!

Another totally awsome chapter I really love the way that you hint at sexualness in the chapter but really dont go into much besides voldie geting some :-) keep up the great work and hope to see another wonderful chapter up from you soon!

That was a great chapter! I can\'t wait for your friend to upload the 12th chappie! Vampire/cupido sex! WhOohOO!!!!

I\'m sure the next chapter will be yummier..... Update soon!!!

Corrections:
I\'m sure you meant the room and not the candy:::
sweet=suite
Snakelet suite

Most probably..... Update! Update!!! Update!!!! UPdate!!!!!

hello! I love your story. Severus is so cute and possesive ^^!!!! you write his and harry\'s characters well. Your wording is very good and you seem to be a very articulate (sp?) person, which is a nice change from the authors on here who have the dialouge as \"Duuuuude, you just ain\'t gona beliiiiivvvvveeeee\". you\'re writing style is VERY good and It\'s clear that your chapters are well thought out and looked over. You seem to take special care in your chapters and once again, that is a very refreashing change from alot of the below mediocre authors on here. The plot of you\'re story, while not original in itself, has a very original and imaginative twist. though you\'re every persistant habbit of leave cliffhangers is frustriating, and you don\'t need them since your story\'s already leave readers wanting more, you seem to be able to give the reader just want they want in the next chapter. All in all you are a very good writer and can\'t wait for your next chapter ^^.