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*dries tears* That was sad....... Poor Severus. The sex scene was incredebly hot, but all I feel now i sorrow....... Great, but sad chapter.... You`re a wonderfull auther...

Keep writting. *reaches for a tissue*

That was the best it was soo good

you are such a goos writer and have really good idea\'s

I love the story please please hurry and update it soon

~~GG~~

*near tears* You killed Lucius!!! You killed my Lucius!!! *starts bawling*

....err...sorry about that. I love your story!! It is GREAT!!! keep it up!!!!!!!!!

That was hot. And sad. What language was that? It looks nice, so it would prolly sound awesome.

When I am the dictating ruler of a small Middle Eastern Country, or South America, you can be on my Supreme Court team. It\'s going to be the funnest job EVER!

WOW Honestly this has to be the best vamp-snape fic ive read :) been looking for a story of this caliber for a while and am so happy to have found it.

The Cupido form actually sounds rather tantalising if one imagines it without adding the demonic side the colours suggest.

Also the vamp-myths you have selected for this fic are intricatly woven into snapes character in such a way that you have a seemless rendition of the character this fic is ment to portray.

There\'s nothing fundamentally wrong with your chapter. What might seem off is two minor aspects. The first is that Harry, despite his nature, is supposed to be opposed to attention from Snape. Yet, he snuggles in without any residual angst. Remember this is supposed to be his hated professor. And second, Snape attacks Dean causing quite a hurt on him, yet Dean gets up and goes into class. AND Dumbledore allows it? Even knowing the nature of the two of them, to go from denying Snape his nature as a vampire to practically condoning a relationship with Harry because to deny it would hurt Harry may make sense, but how did Dumbledore show up so quickly?

Here\'s the hard part: That is my personal opinion based on what YOU indicated may be wrong with the chapter. Next time, don\'t say anything. I probably would not have picked up on either of these possibilities if you had not said anything.

That comment was about ch. 6. I\'m enjoying the heck out of your story: Harry\'s new magical creature is really fantastic! AND I still get more story to read!!!! YEA!!!!!

I really, really liked that last chapter. (btw--sorry for not reviewing chapter 11. >.< Two jobs are killing me) Anyhoo, I think it really added to the story--put for meat on it, and added more possability to the plot. ^_^ Poor Sev, will he ever get a break?

Lucius had to go. Can\'t have him tattling on Severus. Blood used as a lubricant? That is a different kink!

You JUST GOT TO love this fic *nodding* i know i do