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for Our Love Story

by IGGY

person Deans Darling
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok then. Good job. I cant wait for the next. Can you please email me when you post again. Thanks for the entertainment. DD
person Deans Darling
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I\'m intrigued. Very intrigued. I love the 1st person narative. Good job. Well, on to chapter 1.
DD
person sharon
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
person sharon
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now about that cookie, what kind would that be?
person jamie
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this. it\'s hilarious that malfoy is pregnant. can\'t wait for update
person Akusaa
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! He\'s pregnant! Oooh. Update soon please, I wanna know what happens! *grins*
person Akusaa
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It\'s so well written! *munches cookie*

Now please update soon! : )
person sbkar
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six review: Slow trusts at first, but he soon picked up the pace. Hitting my prostate with each trust. I was screaming his name by now.
... I\'m hoping you meant \"thrusts\"?

person Akusaa
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE!

Great story, the characters seem really realistic, not majorly OOC at all.
person tyey
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no dont stop there..............that was so stressful.........great story